Dear classmates, I had no time this afternoon to show you my little composition, written to test my discourse competences. As a matter of fact, it was not certainly little, because I counted around 120 words. Anyway, if you want to read it, here it is:
I love presentations such as the one we heard today. Firstly because of its interesting subject, and secondly because of the communicative skills of the speaker. I couldn't, however, understand the actual meaning of some of the new things I learned, in particular the procedure of the psychogram. When an architect wants, for example, to draw one of those sketches, he must have a previous image in his mind. As a consequence, his draft will be conditioned by that original idea. There will be, moreover, a certain difference between what he thought and what he drew. I wonder, in short, if the new elements of the future building will be the result of the mistakes he made during his blind drawing.
Great composition, Jott!! Certainly, not the shorter, but full of sense, connected what we did today in class and neat. Congratulations!
ResponderEliminarThe winner was who used the fewest number of words in the text, however I am sure most of us did well with more than 50-70 words. As an illustration we can read your text full of sense and connectors as well. And don´t care about sketches drawn by architects, because they need someone who pay for them to become a real building.
ResponderEliminarThe winner was who used the fewest number of words in the text, however I am sure most of us did well with more than 50-70 words. As an illustration we can read your text full of sense and connectors as well. And don´t care about sketches drawn by architects, because they need someone who pay for them to become a real building.
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